I liked the idea of a puppet show it was very different and original. The graphics werent too bad though I found this flash was missing something I dont know i think if there were a more in depth story or something with stronger humour you could be onto something. Keep on truckin ;)
It has been a long time coming
I cant remember the last time i saw a decent clock movie. This obviously took you alot of time and thought. The story was well set out and made me laugh as im sure it did many others. You have alot of talent your graphic work was brilliant and its good to a clock with the old school values who actually takes the time and effort to produce flash. Keep up the good work and B a good example to other clocks ;)
Your graphic work was very nice if there was one thing i could suggest to help improve this submission is upping the quality of the song dont compress it too much i found it hard to understand what was being said the filesize is already good i think if you were to double it there would be an improvement on the side. Other than that your graphics and your idea was awesome i really like how you did the jets on the robots looked very pro keep up the good work :)
This was an awesome awesome movie. The animation suited the music and your animation skills are fantastic everything was smooth as. I loved the style and feel of the movie it was almost like a collaboration but the exception is it was pulled off by one bloke. It takes alot of talent to be able to produce various styles of animation and string them all together. Youve done well and your hard work has paid off :)
Thats what I like going for actually ;D
First submission hey?
Man you blew me away your animation skills are bloody brilliant. This must have taken you a while to do and it shows and the result speaks for itself. You have alot of talent and hope to see alot more of stuff!
I like your style very original and very clever! Would love to see this idea developed more in more episodes.
Dont stop now
Im not sure how long that took you but I have a good feeling youve put more time into this than alot of other submission. I dunno if this will pass or not only time will tell personally I dont believe it should on the basis it hasnt finished but if it does pass judgement than I can understand why. It looks like you are starting to develop a story but you really need to follow it through you can animate which is more than what I can say about other submission you just need to keep working on your project and make it more complete before submitting, I would like to see more of your stuff in the portal.
thanks a lot mate, You have really motivated me now, and I will keep going to make it better
Nice depiction of portal crap
i think that sums it up quite nicely should put together one about the quality flash that is submitted and the path to the frontpage possibly top 50? Maybe another about stolen flash??
Good suggestions, I hope this will be a fun little mini-series with more depth in the next parts depending if it's likable en mass. This is the test pilot.
You should finish what you start
Some of your stuff looks really good you should try finishing your work. It was a good idea putting all your unfinished material into one movie rather than submitting each one individually.
Take the next step
Random fbfs i find are pretty ordinary but it looks like youve worked it out pretty good. You should probably try to make a movie with some characters and a story cause although this did look good alot of people can do it so try to take the next step and use characters.
I AM working on a movie with characters and a plot... I do these for some variety :D
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